Friday, September 24, 2010

Trying to Write a Love Letter

our love is a serene
mountain
so grand and spectacular
people from all over the
world
are impressed by our
nurturing affection

how's that? too poetic?

okay how about this then

if you were a dessert
baby you would be
an ice cream because
you are sweet and full
of flavor

better?  what do you mean
it's dorky!

let me try again

i want to make passionate
love to you outiside in the rain
with the wind blowing
a hint of lavender smell...

wait, wait, wait a minute!
that's not appropriate!
i don't like where that one was going

okay i got it
why don't i just keep it
simple and say...

i love you


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